November Tweets Highlight Editorial Goofs in Heads, Ledes, Fog

November Tweets Highlight Editorial Goofs in Heads, Ledes, Fog

December 1, 2019 Uncategorized 0

Several common editing snafus I found while reviewing web sites for my 8th annual B2B e-news study made up the bulk of my November Tweets. Of 200 articles examined so far, 79 are packed with foggy prose, 75 include headline/deck misfires, and 68 are burdened by run-on opening sentences. Evidence of enterprise reporting is scarce.

As in the past, this year’s study covers 10 articles posted by each of 50 sites analyzed. Updated survey data is posted weekly. For details, follow me on Twitter.

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